Hank Lazer Poems -- Respond Under This Post

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Selected Poems from Days
71
3/3/95

good god bob
you're the one
of course who
made loveable &
why the fuck
not in such
a tight span
these twists of
thinking specific
to an instant

commentary : creeley the bob, days in part a case study of thought's torsion, the short line, collisions & collusions possible, the shifts in direction, heavy staccato "good god bob" splat, to sweet assonance, one, loveable, fuck, such, the delight in the twists, a tight span, in instants, the lyric as collision chamber

74
3/11/95

i sing the body
eclectic uh defective
icing the bawdy
directive rodin to young
rilke "toujours travailler"
all words & no fray
makes yack a dull
"stable & precarious"
rose on licorice er
icarus' wings

commentary : talk in tongues, trane's sax honks, i sing as icing on the cake, a bellyfull, stammer, stutter, the play's the thing, of course work hard the too earnest though ugh, dad's leukemia woven in everywhere, my young son's mishearing heard it better as rose on licorice wings, and why not

77
4/1/95

her virtues i
know thus far
verbal which
what think you
when wind across
key principle
forms of distance
love the
reckless irritant settled
athwart the hips

commentary : days, in part, playing with an erotics of writer/reader relations; last line, the single word "athwart" definitely a whitman-clinker; loving throughout as irritant AND joy; the wind of saying, a poem being taken up and said

81
4/11/95

you put them
there & fix
their place in blocks
& in columns
as you will
& then they have
quite apart from
you relations
all their own
with which you are amused

commentary : a compositional practice, you do put them there by hand i know you do, the poem's existence in time, as it becomes necessarily strange to the writer too, possibly amusing, of necessity so as the poem disconnects from its immediacy of compositional inception, is initially placed & put, but then . . .

83
4/15/95

yes & then
a little less
two blue
& white striped
chairs & the means
of enumerating
sudden content
ment heart in
sists its history is now
& thus not history proper

commentary : rarely, but here, instance of actual immediate surroundings, two specific chairs, as the first line: often poems in the affirmative (though, "& then"), words broken being both: content, and content-ment; the heart moves in, thus insists, a different site of action than some will allow into "history proper"

84
4/15/95

slow to slogan
voracious to
veracity amen
to mendacity
flesh to pleasure
legs to legendary
costly to apostle
mesh to measure
& i wake up
next to you

commentary : by musical extension, made extant, a tent, rolls on & off the tongue, a fleshy pleasure, to be beside you, juxtaposition, awakening to & into that fact, flesh to pleasure, such words so

88
4/21/95

speaking the first
law of economy
you yawn song sweeps
upward & across water's
surface not contra which
would only be two dictions
but each point a hub
radiating infinite spokes
persons tense in shifting
pulse processional

commentary : redundant in e-space to point out, hell yes, more than two dictions, thematized older poetries fond of binary structurings, poems now portals multiply open, from any given point an infinity of directions, made so perhaps with some of the energy, energizing, galvanics of early Williams and later Olson's "projective verse" these too "in shifting/ pulse processional," parading by, the radiating, the pulsing, the transfer of energy, instant by instant, for you to say

126
6/22/95
monk's joy &
studied exuberant
wrong notes infinite
rhythmic insistence
exactly slapped silences
trane's quest question
chaotic divine emily's
compressed
from you (love)
crucially direct address

commentary : recaps sources & muses, quick riffs, monk the first, the joy of right-wrong, the infinite possibilities of rhythm attended to & heard precisely, not the yay-or-nay of binary dumb metrics stressed or un- (how damned inadequate!), to trane, to emily d, to "you" who must be there, otherwise how to address directly